Feedback

After recieving feeback on my music magazine from my teachers and fellow students I have made a few alterations.

I didnt change my front cover as I was told it was good how it was and everyone liked it, however I completely changed my contents page...

This is my new contents page.

I completely changed my contents page as it was by far the weakest aspect of my music magazine. I changed it so the fonts and colours were the same as the front cover making it conventional.

Here is my new double page spread

I only made a few alterations to my double page spread just to make it that little bit better. I made the font smaller so it is more conventional and I spreaded the masthead across both pages.